(Shouts) Put the head back on before we get stung by a jellyfish! The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck - DeviantArt Loud House Alternate Ending: Out of the Picture by . Which she did. (Tugs at it), (They tug and pull while the rest of the family backs away nervously). I was being selfish!. I MESSED UP!!! Give it back! This triggered events that none of the Loud House family could have seen. What seems to be the problem?" Lynn Sr.: (tears up) I can't believe he said we're not a real family. Lana: You know, on second thought, I don't want to be at the beach. A very, and I'm talking VERY, controversial episode of The Loud House. It's my first ever one shot I've done. This made the officer raise an eyebrow, not fully believing them. I can't let those crazy beasts see me! Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. See if I care! While they were still upset about their parents' behavior and getting them kicked out of an awesome hotel, they understood why they did what they did and understood that they shouldn't had forced their parents to take them on their vacation. Lincoln: Lana. The siblings looked down after she said this, making the parents feel even more lousy than they already did. Especially Miss. Years after his death, Lincoln is given the opportunity to see how his sisters are doing. "No," Lucy, the goth said, "Since you don't want us to be here, you can go up to the room and pack everything by yourselves." "Really," Luan said, raising her eyebrows at her parents, "Because if you ask me parents don't go skinny dipping at night, or get the entire family kicked out of the hotel or make their children feel guilty for ruining a vacation that they already ruined." Lincoln: You know what!? SEE YOU NEVER!" "Sure thing," the voice on the other end said. kamenrider. Angus: Oh do tell. This response shocked Lynn Sr. and Rita, Aunt Ruth was someone they could rely in case they went out of town and couldn't trust their kids to be home alone, hearing her say she doesn't want them anywhere near her home made them very worried. I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! They were both very nervous and very terrified of their kids right now. "Aunt Ruth," Rita said, trying to stop the kids from doing something they'd regret, "hang up the phone." You going to dress me up as a chipmunk or a donkey!? Not a loud alt ending6. So about the Duke, Had he ever felt like he was just a glorified peasant in his time around is ten sisters? No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt Head Poet's Anxiety alt scene12. I'll definitely come to your next game, Lynn. (pauses for a few seconds) "Do you guys notlove me anymore? ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? ", Lincoln:[to the viewers] "Maybe I can move into Lisa's fallout shelter. Lynn Sr.: Son..we didn't mean to..we just.we were wrong to-. Look, I see sweaty footprints! I HATE THIS!!! Leni: *Gasp* My Sewing Machine! Angus: (surprised by the question) Oh my. Lincoln: That's what i always say. Because of this, Lincoln sneaks his way out of the kitchen, and next to the staircase. Luan: Yeah, our luck has just run out! Luna turned to him with a glare on her face and said, "Forget it, dad! The Loud House No Such Luck FanficThe Loud House: No Such Luck House of Lies alt ending14. I hate grave digging and poems and I HATE DESPICABLE SPORTS!!! The Loud House (My Version) - Season 2 by LuisLoudestFan on DeviantArt So, I plan to rectify that. Actually, there's something I need to do! Would you mind me speaking to Angus for a bit? Why are you being arrested?! Lucy: But..but you wanted us to believe it. This confused everyone even more, until Lincoln started putting 2 and 2 together. "WE HATE DOING ALL THOSE CHORES FOR YOU, YOU FILTHY SLOB!" Our parents grounded us to this room because we got in trouble yesterday. Even Ronnie Anne was there too. Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. I hate that you don't love me anymore! ", Lucy: "After all, it's not like we always go to each others events 100% of the time, so why should you? Lincoln: I said NO! ", Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myselffell for such bologna. ], Family: "CONGRATULATIONS! "Same here." Everyone heads to Vanzilla, but Lincoln still stays in place). QUIET! WE MAKE EVERYTHING WORSE!!! (Lincoln picks up the head and jumps up and down on it several times.). I can't believe they said they'd tease you for eternity. I hate that fact that you never make up for anything! Nosuchluck Stories - Wattpad Lori soon pulled out her phone and dialed Aunt Ruth's number. (looks at Lincoln with a smile and puts a hand on his shoulder) "All of us. Youve made your point! This proves it. Lynn Sr.: But son..if you wanted time off, all you had to do was just say so! Lincoln was put into a coma during the nsl incident where he meets kamen rider diend and is given his powers afterwards he takes Lily and runs away to canterlot where he. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Lincoln: Well my family doesnt think im bad luck anymore, in fact now they think im good luck. Hearing their son shout at them like this, both mad and sad at them, broke their hearts. Lincoln and Lucy hung their heads in shame and embarrassment. Making the Grade / Vantastic Voyage. #The loud house #lincoln loud #lori loud #leni loud #luna loud #Luan Loud #Lynn Loud #Lucy Loud #lana loud #lola loud #lisa loud #lily loud #the loud house headcanons #the loud . "What do you kids want?" YOU'RE THE WORST FAMILY TO EVER LIVE!!!! You were fine with me sleeping outside and being locked outside? Hey guys, I'm sorry I was so horrible. I got to find somewhere to hide! She then added, "I was just talking to my boyfriend when suddenly the sliding door closes and I can't get back in. "WHENEVER WE VISIT YOU WE ARE MISERABLE!" ], Baseball Announcer: "Yowza." ", Lori: (with a broken voice) "What kind of monsters are we?!". IT'S ALL MY FAULT!!! It centers around an Alternate Timeline involving the events of the infamous episode "No Such Luck", where the Loud family thought that Lincoln was bad luck. I-, Lincoln: "LYNN!" During the drive, there was nothing but silence, which is very uncommon for a vehicle that is usually occupied by 13 people. Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. Trying explaining that!" "They're not the only guilty ones," Lynn, the girl in red with brown hair tied in a ponytail, responded back with, in a bit of wise-cracking tone, "Yesterday, Lana and I broke the elevators. Loud House - FierceSquid276 - Wattpad (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are). "That we had to learn about all of this when hotel security barged up to our room due to numerous complaints!" Pre-Story Notice: Hello everyone. White hair extended ending9. Nsl Stories - Wattpad Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. @JackLeighton19 Idea on How to End This Story: Employee: (Grunts) That's it! One of the Boys alt ending4. lincoln. Lincoln: You are a stupid bully, a coward, a nobody, a freak, a lamebrain, a beast and the worst sister ever AND THAT'S THAT!!!! Lola: What if we get stung or bitten by a shark!? Lori finished with. No more Loud Family? Not you or Lucy. ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. And we're sorry, but it's been so long since your father and I had time, real time, to ourselves and I guess we got carried away." Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. But right now, ive had it! I wont spend the whole afternoon working up an over sweat in that stupid costume that reeks and doesnt fit me! (cries). This is also a parody fanfiction that is based on Spongebob Squarepants' episode 'Hall Monitor,' The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron's episode 'Hall Monster,' Wayside's episode 'Safety Monitor,' it is also based on a chapter from Loud House Tales that was called 'Hall Monitor,' however that is no longer up for some reason, and Lynn Loud Jr. being a hall monitor in the Loud House season 5 episode 'Schooled!' ", [It's revealed to be Lincoln in the runabout costume], Lincoln:[to the viewers] "My plan is simple: I watch the game in disguise, and when the Squirrels win, everyone will see I'm not bad luck. Lisa: I was a fool to fall for it all, I swear. Someone at front desk please respond." "Not until tomorrow," Lincoln replied, confused as to why he was asking this. Rita: Honey! Lincoln: (off-screen) Where are you going Luce? "WE HATE THOSE STUPID CATS OF YOURS!" (breaks from the hugs) *sighs* "I'm sorry for lying. Ronnie Anne: [Sighs] The softball game she accused Lincoln of being bad lack was on Friday the 13th. ", Lana: "Yeah, we know everyone needs to unwind once in a while. How can I help you?" "Listen to what?" She told the kids that their parents caused them to get kicked out, she told them what they did and, in a sense, she was responsible for the kids' destructive rampage. The voice asked. "Although," Lana, a six-year old tomboy wearing a baseball, added, "if it helps we tried to fix it." On the other end, Maddie, an African-American woman in her mid-20's with short curly hair, heard what Felix said and got worried. Even you Lisa! UPDATE: 20/04/2018- the next chapter has been written I just need to correct some thing's from this chapter. Luna put. All of a sudden another 6-year old wearing a princess gown snatched the walkie talkie out of Felix's hand and said, "All right lady. "But you know what's even more lousy than that?" Hearing that caused everyone to become shocked, but they didn't know what to say. Eventually, one of them said, "Look officer. But i didnt expect to be ejected from the house and lose everything i had! Whenever you fell like you need a break, you're free to take a rain check. (Lincoln is sitting on the back porch while his family is at the game, looking pretty mad. You all are really, really bad luck! Lori said. You think you can just say sorry after making me look like a freak and everything will be fine!?! Morag: is it now? No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. Unfortunately, they were not quick enough and, in a swift moment, the four were launched into the room across the hall, landing in a painful pile on the floor. Pulling out his walkie talkie, he said, "This is Hotel Officer Mooresfield. [Normal - Remake - Original - Alternate Ending] 11 Louds a Leapin' Intern for the Worse / The Old and the Restless. "Uh, sweetie," her dad said, in a nervous tone, "Think you and Luna can get out of the front seats, so I can drive us home." They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. I'll admit, it was stupid and wrong of me to lie to them and take advantage of it, and I probably should've just told them that I just wanted some me time, but honestly, I think this is way more than I deserve. The important thing is that we learn from them. Lincoln: I don't believe it! The family and Bobby are there to support Lynn. Ugh!" Lincoln: (to the viewers) "Well, looks like everyone learned something. Re-Uniting With Lincoln by KingMercury254. Lisa: I have truly disgraced the scientific community Lola: Does this mean Linky doesn't love us anymore? Lynn Sr.: NO! (They enter the house, but Lincoln is nowhere to be seen.). Theres nothing lucky about it! Lynn: Well, its because of that costume that i won my last game! And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. ), (It cuts to the main street. "Now I want an explanation," the man started with, as he stomps a few steps toward them, "As to all of this. Incredible from The Incredibles on the cover. Luan brought it. Ive often helped feed your pets and come to your stunt moves. A rather large family that sticks together through thick and thin. (to the viewers) "Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna have some fun with my family." So consider this as a fourth fanfic of mine. I have truly failed the term 'scientist'. My coffin. Loud House, No Such Luck sequel - YouTube Also, her kids weren't wrong about the pudding, that stuff was so vile it would turn her stomach into a BMX dirt track for days, so the kids' decision had its positives after all. Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. He even throws many of his family's items out the windows, such as Luna's guitar, Luan's comedy props, Lisa's science set, Lori's phone, Leni's sewing machine and dresses, Rita's typing machine, Lynn Sr's cowbell, Lana's animal shelters, Lola's cosmetics and tiaras, Lucy's poetry book and coffin, the TV and most of Lynn's sports equipment. ", Lincoln: "Guys, it's me!" Those honors go to Nickelodeon, Teletoon, Chris Savino, Stephen Hillenberg, John A. Davis, Louis Sachar and Gold Cartoonist (who is located on fanfiction). We feel so ashamed!" Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! N Eddy's big picture show . Even more computer typing was heard but soon afterward the woman on the other going, "Hhhmmmm.," was also heard. I came to your game to support you, not just because you threatened me with your bat. They messed up and their children were furious with them because of it. (She hugs Lincoln again), Lincoln: "Thanks Lynn. Rita Her Rights alt ending11. His sisters join too and put Lynn in her place. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. (She sees the smashed trophy case and gasps). You're scaring even me. That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. Ive come to many grave-digging events and cemeteries with you! ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. Pre-Story Notice: It's amazing. Are you no longer grounded to the room?" (sniffles) I'd better make a home fast. "Wait," Lori interrupted with, "How could our parents get us kicked out just for taking a late night dip?" No Such Luck | The Loud House Encyclopedia | Fandom Computer typing was heard yet again and, after a few moments. Reacting to The Loud House (Fanfic) - TV Tropes [knocks Pep down], [Lynn finishes her run and gets picked up by her family in celebration of her victory. Lincoln said, as tears started forming in his eyes. The siblings began agreeing with that statement, but Lynn Sr. and Rita were frightened. Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. ", Rita: "And tomorrow, we're going to the beach." However, that silence would not last long as the security man and the guests saw the kids' faces turned red with anger, steam started bellowing out of their ears and a devastating fire formed in their eyes, the four started trying to get out of the room quickly, as they knew something bad was going to happen. Lana: (sniffles) Butthese were all our pride and joy! Lynn and Lana were accidentally destroying the hotel shower. They are looking very heartbroken.). but I just really wanted to get it off my chest. ", Lincoln: "I won't deny that I brought this on myself. Takes place in the middle of the events of the infamous episode No Such Luck. "And we're glad they did," Lisa added, "Because thanks to the man that stopped by as well as a woman at the front desk, we were able to learn that you and dad apparently couldn't keep your own promise." First, if they are to go on vacation by themselves, they let the kids stay at home, second, they agree to bring swimwear and wear when going for a late night swim, three, if the place they stay at is great then they go there for a family vacation in the future and four, no more visits to Aunt Ruth's. They go flying, screaming in terror and splash into the seawater.). They all shouted. I need to get out of here! You never let me have a say in the matter! Lori yelled. What do you think, Pep? I tried to make it as comical as i could. (He picks up the squirrel suit, jumps up and down on the head and starts ripping the chest)", Lynn: HEY! "What," Felix said, "what is it?" ", Lincoln: "Thanks. (Lincoln throws Lynn into the rest of the family, with a massive, bowling-sounding crash. And with that, they headed towards the lobby. the family opens the door to see a ticked off Lincoln. (It cuts to the beach, Lincoln is in sunglasses and a hat.). Lincoln: Alright, i admit! ), Lincoln: (to the viewers) " I can't believe they actually locked me out the house, which is also my home. Lynn: Put that suit back on Lincoln! When my so-called 'family' gets home, I'm gonna have a talk with them." Yes." Rita asked. Lincoln: "Oh really." Especially Lynn. It's no fun without Lincoln! No Such Luck (Alternative ending, my version) - The Loud House Encyclopedia Learn more. "No," Lynn Sr. and Rita responded with, not liking where this was going. "It looks like the room is being occupied by a Mr. Todd Fowler, Kyle Dawson and Miguel Diaz as of this morning." The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. Anything bad happen then? "We just wanna tell you how much we HATE YOU, YOU GROSS UGLY THING!" MLP - Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Pinkie. Uh-uh, I'm nothaving it. (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. He even then flips over and smashes the trophy case. He helped hold us all together and outings just won't be the same without Lincoln. Luna spots Lincoln). Lucy. "YOU HEARD HER!" (They smile, Rita comes over to hug him and rest of them except Lynnjoin in for a group hug. Lucy: (shedding tears) Me too. Luna: We dont go to everybodys events all the time bro! Lynn: FINE! Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. We're already hanging on a thread as it is! She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? divine001 on Tumblr (They keep searching the house. Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. "I can't believe you," Luna yelled, "I didn't even do anything yesterday and you still decided to ground me for no reason!" Luan then walked up to Leni and whispered into her ear. I promise I won't be absent all the time, just once in a while. . Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room.